An Off-the-cuff Fib Poem

This pedometer geek poet has never written a Fib poem (based on the Fibonacci sequence), but for the W3 prompt, I wrote the following:

the
shell
within
a spiral
chambered nautilus
siphoning tentacles searching…
~Nancy Brady, 2024

As a (student) invertebrate lab instructor at Ohio Northern University, I enjoyed learning about all invertebrates (well, except for spiders, but I digress) especially cephalopods. Some of the most intriguing cephalopods were cuttlefish and the chambered nautilus. Thanks, Dr. Eric V. Nelson, for all the knowledge you imparted to your students through the years including me.


About pedometergeek

A pharmacist by profession, a haiku poet by nature, I read and write. I have my debut book of haiku, Ohayo Haiku, and another somewhat alternative haiku book, Three Breaths, but write other genres. I have an illustrated children's book, The Adventures of Aloysius. I also read...lots of novels! My favorite is, and remains, Ayn Rand's Atlas Shrugged but I am also a big Harry Potter fan. I truly am a pedometer geek strapping on my pedometer as soon as I awaken.
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16 Responses to An Off-the-cuff Fib Poem

  1. This was my first attempt at a fib poem, too. Yours turned out wonderfully!

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  2. Jules says:

    Captured the essence! 👍

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  3. I really like the flow of this. It feels very haiku-like to me. (probably could be restructured into a haiku!)

    “the shell within” That’s so layered- like a nautilus shell. Good stuff!

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    • Thanks, D. I really appreciate your complimentary words. It does seem a bit haiku-like (or tanka-like) and maybe I could convert it. The chambered nautilus is a cool creature, and this is the first time I’ve written about one. Will it be the last? Maybe, maybe not.                  ~Nan

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  4. Hi Nan,

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the amazing Jude Italki, is now live!

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/06/19/w3-prompt-112-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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  5. cindy knoke says:

    Cuttlefish and Nautilus have always fascinated. Horse Shoe Crabs too. I have a collection of Nautilus fossils. What is most remarkable is that all three ancient creatures are still existing.

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    • Yes, Cindy, there are living fossils living among us as you so deftly pointed out. Thanks for reading and commenting; I appreciate it (and your obvious love of invertebrates).    ~Nan

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